26.5.11

Can You Help Me?

Secret Garden Steps, originally uploaded by llamnudds.



I'm on the hunt for inspiration: through pictures. Do you think that you could give me a few links to pictures of "secret gardens"? If so, you would earn my eternal gratitude! Here are a few examples:


Entrance to my secret garden, originally uploaded by tibchris.

The secret garden, originally uploaded by edbrambley.





25.5.11

Strawberries

Planted Strawberry in Pot, originally uploaded by Limerick6.



"Here, taste this." He turned his head to a suspicious angle, then slowly opened his mouth. Cecily plucked a berry from the small bush, rubbed it on her skirt, and popped it onto his tongue. 


He bit down and gave a strange smile. "What is it?"


"A strawberry! Surely you've eaten strawberries before."


"Of course, but I don't recall any of them tasting like this. It's the most wonderful thing I've ever eaten. "


"What? Does it taste like dirt and rain and insects?"


"No, like the closest thing to eating something alive."

Cecily gave a small laugh that said, surely I should expect this by now. "You are the strangest fish I've ever met."


"And do you like strange fish?" If he had been able to look he would have been looking at hard at her face, trying to interpret the curves and lines. As it was his sightless eyes were aimed in the general direction of the lake where the sun's last rays were just disappearing from the water's surface. 


"Very much so."

23.5.11

A Cloud of Witnesses....

It's fantastic to have a circle of fellow "writing-fiends" gathered around you. The companionship is amazing because a cluster of Writers is not like an affinity group of "piano tuners", "gym-goers" or "arborists" (or at least I imagine not, despite having never been any of these): being a writer seems to me more like being a man, a woman, or an African-American. It's an identity that goes beyond a hobby and into the way our brains work and the strange things we do to our lives. Being a Writer is more than a pastime, it's a lifestyle.


I love sitting around with my Writer pals and having heated discussions over characters, plot-twists, favorite authors, and the frustrations and joys that come with opening your vein and putting it all on paper. I could jabber on for hours about my ideas and brainstorms, and it's fabulous to have someone who knows that feeling to bounce it all off of. It's the lovely presence of audience, interest, and appreciation--not to mention the "lightbulb moments" that sometimes get kickstarted in that kind of atmosphere. 


That's why I would highly recommend any Writer to join a club or support network of some kind--on the internet or in the real world--where you can be criticized, awed, and inspired. There's really nothing like it. 

21.5.11

Introducing Roseburn Hall



   Seven years ago all the lights in Roseburn Hall had gone out for the first time in a century. There had always been at least one candle—in the window of the porter’s lodge—burning through the night to beckon guests and warn away strangers. Seven years ago all of the windows went dark. There had always been a throng of serving women in clean white aprons to polish the expensive tables and keep flowers in vases. Seven years ago the fine furniture was left to molder in dusty corners.
   The few servants that were left had scurried through the last steps of departure, wringing hands, saying choked farewells, and laying flowers at a fresh tomb—like a temple to the past. Doors were shut and bolted tight, wagons clattered away, and an air of disuse settled down on the great house almost immediately. 
   The lady of the hall was dead, her only child had been sent to live with family, and so the ancient home of her family was destined to fall into ruin unless someone should come and take up residence there. Not likely, for all its wealth and grandeur. It was remote, reserved, and there was only one person in the world now with a right to it.
   And so it stood for years, its weary stone rebuffing the wind, slate tiles defying the rain, shutters fighting off the mildew. The gardens catapulted into activity, reclaiming all the clean-cut paths and statuesque shrubbery with nature’s own wild landscape. To the eyes of the world the Hall was still and solitary, wholly abandoned. 

19.5.11

To Be Original....

Wordsmithing is such a tricky thing. One moment I feel wonderfully original--creative phrases and metaphors flow from my fingertips onto the keyboard and everything goes smoothly. Then I'm afraid it's going too smoothly--that I'm just recycling stock phrases and tired cliches gleaned from other authors.


So what is it? 


Am I using too many adjectives, am I using too few? Are "became a blur", "pointed looks", "no longer paying attention", "blinked furiously", "clearing the cobwebs", "the figure straightened", etc. all just over-used, meaningless phrases? Is my "well balanced" sentence structure falling into a mind-numbing pattern?


Alas, self-doubt would seem to be the writer's constant companion.